Thursday 27 October 2016

Candy-Man And The Great Fight Of Candy-Vile

WALT to write a story suitable to entertain a  5-6 year old.


Credit- Johanna Azuela & Ella Murdoch & Riley Betman

  Candy-Man And The Great Fight Of Candy-Vile


Once upon a time in Candy-Vile the happiest, most colourful town there ever was, everything is made out of candy; the people, streets, buildings , EVERYTHING, there was ruckus being caused on the streets, everyone began to gather around the mischievous problem maker. It was the Vegienator the baddest piece of broccoli in all of the lands and he was here to cause problems and his side kicks the Carrate’s, they were turning everything into vegetables which was not good for the Candy people.


Candy-Man, the best superhero in Candy-Vile in his purple and golden body suit with,  his striking blonde hair and Mr. Gummy, who was a little red gummy person with sugar sprinkled all over him were in the Candy Cave when all of a sudden, beep! Beep! There was a mission for them, Mr. Gummy ran over to see what is was.
¨We have a mission Candy-Man, it´s about the Vegienator he´s been turning everything into Vegetables!¨Candy-Man responded in a worried voice,
¨Let's go, this seems really bad.¨


Not many minutes later Candy-Man and Mr. Gummy were in the Candy Car and began zooming off to the center park where the Vegienator and the Carrate’s had been last seen. As they arrived, all they could see was vegetables and they started to panic.
“Mr. Gummy  you go find the carrate’s and I’ll look for the Vegienator,” instructed Candy-man.
“On it!” replied Mr. Gummy and went away to look. Candy-Man looked around until her heard a scream from not too far away.” Over here candy-man, he’s over here!!” Candy-Man ran as fast as he could.

When Candy-Man arrived to the place he heard the scream, he met face to face with the Vegienator!
“Well, well, well we met again Candy-Man,” said the Vegienator in an evil voice with a grin on his face. “Yes and this time I will win once and for all.” They began fighting head to head.


Meanwhile Mr. Gummy was in full force battle with the Carrete’s. PEW KAPOW ZAP KOPOSH POW BOOM BOSH POUFFE!! Out of nowhere the striking purple Carrate’s lost their deep purple colour and shiney black grass like hair and they started changing shapes and then poof! They turned into to orange, glowing, delicious looking Jellybeans. Mr. Gummy told the Candy’s to jump on his back and he flew around trying to look for Candy-Man.


PEW KAPOW WOOSH KAPOW ZIIIIIIIING!! Candy-Man began shooting  out his rays of candidness, but Vegienator started fighting back with his rays of vegetables. They both knew that the loser would turn into the other kind either the candy side or the vegetable side. Candy-Man's rays were going strong but the vegienator started to struggle, his rays were being taken over by the Candy-Man.


Everyone in Candy-Vile had gathered around to see the great fight of Candy-Vile. Mr. Gummy found where the fight was and landed and the Candy’s jumped off. The Vegienator called for the Carrate’s, but they screamed out above all the noise “WE ARE ON THE GOOD SIDE NOW!!!” All three of the sidekicks joined in helping Candy-Man to try and win the fight.


They were successful, they had beaten the Vegienator!!  
“YES, we did it, WE DEFEATED THE VEGIENATOR!!” exclaimed Candy-Man in a proud voice.
The Vegienator began transforming into pastel green stick of candy floss that looked as soft as a cloud. All they could hear was the roar of the screaming crowd. Everything turned back into to candy and everyone lived happily ever after!