Re-crafting my writing

WALT recraft boring story's and turn them into interesting story's using descriptive language

Room 5 and 6 recrafted our boring story's and turned them into interesting story's using the recrafting grid and we learnt how to set up the recrafting grid and use it.

My next step is to recraft longer story's so I can improve my recrafting skills.

Here is a picture of my recrafting in the grid.

and here's one of my second page